I recently started writing songs, and lots of ideas of different genres have coem to me. Here's a link to the one that's closest to finished.

Please critique the lyrics, playing, etc. Suggestions for improvement are welcome.

I know i can't sing, so comments about that are wasted...lol...if I'm to go anywhere with this music thing, I'll need to get a vocalist. that's life.

https://soundcloud.com/user-781639532/song1allmylife

I'm not fishing for compliments...be real.

Thanks!