A Couple Of Songs

Hi Folks
Only just noticed this part of the forum?? Is it new?? Anyhow, I've posted these songs on another thread so apologies if you've already heard them. They are both upbeat commercial rock songs. I Know Something You Don't Know is here and performed by my band Holywell:
http://www.songwriting4guitar.com/holywell

Butterfly Tattoo is here and performed by me:
http://www.songwriting4guitar.com/butterfly-tattoo-rock

Thaks for having a listen and I welcome any comments ( even bad ones:) )
Shayman

Hi Shayman

A couple of things I hope are constructive critique.

Have you tried reversing the vocal parts on "I know something you don't know"?
I think your bandmate Samantha's voice might fit the lead better.

Quite like the vibe of the "Butterfly Tattoo" song
One point though and I hope you don't mind me saying this, but to my ears your guitar is off tune?
Either naturally out, or it's an intonation issue, most noticeable on lead lines and fills.
Or maybe it was the beer? lol




Thanks for sharing them.
Regards.
Den.