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mnchdrk25
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12/11/2010 10:11 pm
This is my first attempt at writing a song.

https://www.createspace.com/Preview/1074881

Its about a child trying to find a way to visit her sick grandmother for the holidays.

I could use some advice on the guitar parts.
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compart1
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12/12/2010 12:03 pm
Hi Wendy...
Nice xmas song..
For my taste I would mellow out the treble in the vocals.
Great job.. Good luck...
Gordon
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mnchdrk25
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12/12/2010 8:39 pm
Gordon Thank you for feedback I'll see what I can do about balancing out the sound.

I think I like soundclicks a little better, so I now have this on sounclick.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1128837

Wendy
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