Sounds great!!! Your timing is excellent and your strumming consistency is is great too. How long have you been playing?

My suggestion would be to keep playing this and listen for things you could do to spice it up a bit, in terms of dynamics and strumming pattern. What do you hear in your head that could spice it up a bit? What do YOU think of your recording and how do YOU think it could sound better. See if you can translate what you are hearing in your head to the guitar.

You have a fantastic foundation to work from. Great timing is 90% of the battle!